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Roger Dunsmore

For a Chinese Friend

Your uncle grew up next to the shipyard,
became a harbor pilot
guiding those foreign ships.
He knew six languages
from talking to those foreign devils.
And so they arrested him.
Any man who spoke six foreign languages
must be a spy,
and kept him ten years in prison.
Sick, a swelling liquid in the stomach,
something wrong with the liver,
they let him out to die.
Though merely a child,
you remember him
sitting in the bed,
not able to speak
even one language,
but giving the high sign--thumbs up,
for you,
the girl bringing the warm, moist towels
for the family to wipe their faces
after eating.

I do not know
by what right
I speak of this,
these pools
of bright pain
just beneath the surface
of every family
in China.

The children ride their bikes
back and forth through the pumpkin
smashed in the street.

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Roger Dunsmore teaches at the University of Montana in Missoula. His most recent book is called Earth's Mind: Essays in Native Literature. His web page is here.
Email Roger Dunsmore at dunfall@gumballpoetry.com


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Jose Schwartz from Portland, OR

this is what I try to explain about the Chinese
Always a big fan of Dunsmore's work, this one really sums up the lives of a lot of Chinese I've met. Harsh reality over there. What I like about Dunsmore's work is the non-poeticness of it. Not that it isn't poetic but it isn't formulaic like some poetry. Nice images.



scott (buk3994@aol.com) from lexington, ky

lacking vital details
the subject of this piece comes off as neither chinese or a friend. a stale arrangement of words that fails to conjure any true feelings from the author or for the reader.



Kevin (ducsinh@yahoo.com)

Last lines
I agree with the guy from KY. The last three lines seemed completely detached from the focus of the poem. Also, where is this taking place? US or in China?

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