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Scott Poole

New York Women

I have never been to New York
but I imagine all New York women
having long hair, long hair
they are always combing,
thick hair that gets loose
and crawls down the skyscrapers
in the static of the afternoon,
past the anxious,
the arguments,
flying with reflections of angels
sifting through rising souls
to finally fall over the faces of bums
napping between
hot dog carts
and heating grates,
drifting down through
dreams onto their
stringless violins.

New York Women originally published in The Cheap Seats.
Also by Scott Poole If I Only Had a Brain -->

Scott Poole, a graduate of the Eastern Washington University MFA in Creative Writing Program, helps run the Eastern Washington University Press. His first book of poetry debuted this spring, entitled The Cheap Seats. His web page is here.
Email Scott Poole at srpoole@gumballpoetry.com


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8.03.2000
Jasmine from Ontario

Sucks to rhyming!
I love the whole cocept used. Ignore those who suggest rhyming, as it is highly overrated.



Kelli Brooke Haywood (kellibrooke@death-star.com) from Moorehead, Kentucky

Nice flow and changes from beginning to end.
I enjoyed this poem because the subject stayed fluid yet the poem took you somewhere. It painted a picture of New York while describing the hair of New York women. Just describing the hair alone would not have been as interesting.


M Madison (aka_madison@hotmail.com) from Austin, TX

"drifting down through dreams onto their stringless violins"
great emotional visual.


D. Welch from NY, NY

5 stars might blow up his head!
I live in New York. It would seem that he HAD been here. He has trapped the feeling of NY in his words and tangled its sights in the long hair of the women that is... is New York


ron bee (ronbee@juno.com) from St. Louis, MO.

kEEP TRYING.
Keep trying, Scott Poole. Also, don't be afraid to edit. My opinion (who cares?) is that you should learn to write rhyming poetry first. Get a feel for it. Aftern you've writeen a couple of hundred rhyming poems then try the other kind. Most of us should leave the non-rhyming poems to Walt Whitman. And he's dead.

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