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Mark Podojil

Sonnet for M.H.

I've been gathering bouquets of feathers
To sew into gloves to soften my touch;
And I've been busy, loosening tethers
Taking great care not to let out too much.
I've been rummaging through chests caked with gray
For old bolts of cloth and things to stop time,
For whispering books I found in Bombay,
And vials of oil I stole from a shrine.
A picnic of chores to tailor your room,
Where we'll usher the pear-gold of the morn’
Hefted a'swing in an eternal bloom.
Smash the clock, leave your clothes and shoes unworn!
Forget about the day, its demands and its light,
And let's fill our bodies with the stars of the night.



Mark Podojil has a degree in geology from the University of Georgia. He earns money by writing computer code for a pharmaceutical company and makes a living handcrafting classical guitars. He's got a pretty good back dunk and people say he looks like a cross between young Steve Martin and Potsy Webber. Mark also won twice in our 72 character Y2K thoughts contest.

Email Mark at
mpodojil@gumballpoetry.com.


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06.12.2000
Alysoha Tristan Sonju from Missoula MT

reminiscent of ondaatje...dark and engulfing
Sigh...very well done...dreamy in a suffocating sort of way. like diving deep into a tepid pool of indigo...and pulled off in a sonet form too! not easy...



04.07.2000
Sherry Chandler Williams from Lexington, KY

The first two lines are great.
Those first two lines really stop me in my tracks. After that, unfortunately, the imagery starts to get diffuse and way too poetic. The notion of letting out the tether but not too far is actually a bit disturbing.



04.05.2000
C. Barboza (Godsroom3@aol.com) from Harrisburg, Pennsylvania

inspiring
I've been struggling with trying to write a sonnet of my own and I only hope I am able to express my intentions for my beloved with such careful word choice as Mr. Podojil does.



2.14.2000
gnaomi

beautiful.
i sent your verse to my fiance...







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