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John Burgess


Rain That Imitates Anne Waldman

rain that trips and falls
rain that pisses its pants
rain that defies fire
rain that dares peel off its opaque plastic poncho
rain that translates 13th Century Chinese poetry
rain that levitates, meditates, buddhas and nirvanas
rain that haikus and dives into Basho's ocean
rain that laps land, floats islands, disintegrates continents
rain that washes ashore in pepples
rain that levels the playing field
rain that throws everything out of focus
rain that falls on me, floods my dreams and faucets
rain that taps on windows and wakes us so we make love to its rhythm
rain that soaks our T-shirts, clings to our skin, leaves us too aware of our bodies
rain that showers together
rain that grows moss, nourishes indifference
rain that filters coffee and perks grounds
rain that dips biscotti
rain that shows yellow on the live Doppler radar
rain that drops acid
rain that rains black, the ash of people and buildings
rain that retaliates, assassinates
rain that stains, rain that terrors
rain that weathers cement, cries tears into pavement



John Burgess has worked as a reporter and copy editor for weekly newspapers in Montana and Washington, and has taught English in Japan. He has been published in PoetsWest Literary Journal, and was a winner in the 1999 King County Poetry and Art on Buses project. He currently lives in Seattle with his family.

Email John Burgess at jb@gumballpoetry.com.


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7.25.2000
Jasmine from newmarket, ontario

refreshingly different, without being too perky
This poem differs from the cliches we find on many poetry links. It's not too perky, but not whiney, either. It has a "real" feel to it, as if based on feeling and obsevation (not necessarily of physical things)



7.12.2000
Austin Saunders (StarChillicothe@webtv.net) from Albuquerque, New Mexico


I really liked the style and sound and rhythm of your poem. Anne Waldman is one of my favorite poets and this does remind me of her.



5.04.2000
karah (karah@gumballpoetry.com) from Lexington, KY

I like the way the repetition mirrors the subject matter
I also like the rhythm that sounds like rain and I admire the ending -- it has an impact but is not melodramatic. Go go go!







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