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7.1.2000
jo neace krause (Bjobert@aol.com) from weston west virginia
  
made me laugh. has a good mind behind the words.
The poem is upbeat and sweet, like a good dance. Needs more focus however to make it sting a little somewhere.

5.31.2000
jill berry (aphexs_spangle_maker@hotmail.com) from arizona
   
beautifully written with a smarting accuracy
finally a poem to make one feel something inside. "souls make bad pets" and "the heart will fall in love with itself." so perfect.

5.09.2000
Liliana (zepharia@yahoo.com) from Bryn Mawr, PA
  
I like the premise
and it's great to absorb.

5.04.2000
Joe Bangert (jmb488@psu.edu) from University Park, PA

You started off so promising and then...
What happened? It started off so well with your early descriptions of the rib cage and then you decided you wanted to write about your soul, then your heart, I mean, pick a topic and stick with it.

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