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Fred Giacomino


Rib Cage

Mimic, mimic, mimic, it
repeats even in sleep
like a bloated conure
perched on the aorta.

The stubborn animal refuses
to learn any language.
It speaks only with
its own strange murmur.

"It gets angry sometimes,"
the doctor replies, pointing
to hairline cracks along
the x-rayed rib cage.

The film shows no
other dark space where
the soul should be
but the doctor assures,

"Souls make bad pets."
He insists on prescriptions
and reads the cryptic
instructions he pecked out:

Spread some sanguinaria over
its bowl of sunflower
seeds and chili peppers
to stop blood feathers,

and direct the mirror
to its gaze so
the heart will fall
in love with itself.



Fred Giacomino is originally from Butte, Montana and is a recent graduate from the creative writing program at the University of Montana in Missoula. See his poem, The Drive Home, also in this issue. This is his first time in print. Read more of Fred's work at his website.


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7.1.2000
jo neace krause (Bjobert@aol.com) from weston west virginia

made me laugh. has a good mind behind the words.
The poem is upbeat and sweet, like a good dance. Needs more focus however to make it sting a little somewhere.



5.31.2000
jill berry (aphexs_spangle_maker@hotmail.com) from arizona

beautifully written with a smarting accuracy
finally a poem to make one feel something inside. "souls make bad pets" and "the heart will fall in love with itself." so perfect.



5.09.2000
Liliana (zepharia@yahoo.com) from Bryn Mawr, PA

I like the premise
and it's great to absorb.



5.04.2000
Joe Bangert (jmb488@psu.edu) from University Park, PA

You started off so promising and then...
What happened? It started off so well with your early descriptions of the rib cage and then you decided you wanted to write about your soul, then your heart, I mean, pick a topic and stick with it.







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