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11.02.2000
Tina Broderick from A small town in western Massachusettes
   
Wow
This is life as I have seen it, felt, and smelled it. Roger...the sterotype has been broken:)
The last stanza blew me away.

11.02.2000
henry from ca
   
superior quality
i really enjoyed this poem from beginning to end. there's a sense of sadness and longing and beauty as well. it reminded me of the movie american beauty.

8.16.2000
Erica Bell from Portland, OR
   
Wonderful
There was something about the transitions the way that it flowed that made me want to read on. Beautifully constructed. The slight humor was wonderful but not over done.

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