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Gavin Adair

Returning Together

It is such a dry town.

  Like hanging around in the negatives
  of an old roll of film.
  But we aren't staying long enough
  for the snow to become slush
  black and grey and full of
  pebbles and leaves and traction sand
  pushed around by the tires
  like our tumbling grey ghosts
  rattling within the flash
  framed together
  under some patio awning.

This town is a photograph
of us.


Gavin Adair lives in Portland, Oregon.
Email him at gavin_adair@gumballpoetry.com


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12.30.99
jo from SF, CA

brilliant descriptive quality
This poem oozes passion and boredom, two feelings that seem to go together often but no one really acknowledges. There is a great use of words that makes me feel as though I am there, hiding in the negative. Great poem


11.09.99
Ariono Giovonni LaBu from sacramento, california

a stillness frame full of stone
you have a keen command of the language and use such as a paint brush in this work, i applaud the effort and encourage you to keep on

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