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Trampas Johnson


The Untold Story of Charles Brown
and the Girl with the Red Hair


What's wrong, Charles
The girl with red hair asked as she sat on the bench next to him
And opened her lunch.

It has been a rough week
Charles began.
Linus has a tumor - Sally's been sick.
Lucy has been too busy with Schroeder to set up her psychiatrist stand
When I finally needed it.
I can't understand the grownups.
Or grownup problems.

She took his hand, and they lay down on the grass.
And the little red haired girl just held him.

And they drifted off to sleep.

Charles concentrated on the rhythmic tickle of her breath on the back of his neck
And the years of yearning that had been bottled up
Bubbled and churned and swirled. But-
Chalking it up to heartburn-
He slid beyond the waking world and dreamed.

He felt the innocent brush of her lips on his
And believed he was still dreaming.
The world around him exploded.
His cares, thrown from his mind
Like a half-eaten tuna sandwich,
His Nostrils burned with the scent of her
And dolphin safe fish.
And night rose, and pressed its cold wet nose against the two, and they drew closer,
Huddled together under the safety of Linus' blanket.
And the little red haired girl just held him.

In the morning, Woodstock sang,
and the dog flew his house to World War One Germany
And the little red haired girl was gone-
And Charles finally knew what "Good Grief" was.


Trampas Johnson lives in Minot, North Dakota.
He can be reached by email at trampas@gumballpoetry.com


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5.09.00
Harley (pearlsandlace) from Kansas

Very charming.
Very charming and touching. Fantastic job. I applaud you Mr. Johnson. Keep up the good work.


3.16.00
constance from providence, R.I.

I applaud the poem for its' clarity of such a strong emotion.
I think the number of reviews is an indication that the feeling was very clear in the poem. I think infatuation is very chaotic in a persons' mind and he made it simple.


2.21.00
Kristen Webb (ensolette@aol.com) from Tallmadge, Ohio

Intimate
This poem, and this poet, will touch people. And that's what it's all about.


12.14.99
Misti Velvet Rainwater (mnemosyne26@hotmail.com) from Bridgeport, TX

Original & Authentic
I respect the hell outta this poem. Maybe because I have always identified so strongly with Charlie Brown (the never getting a Valentine thing) and Snoopy (the whole Red Baron escapism thing). In a nutshell, this poem ROCKS!!!


11.12.99
Mark (ma@vegacom.on.ca) from Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Impressive. Captivating.
Well done, Mr. Johnson! Your poem encapsulates our 20th Century moment, with all of its celebration and sacrifice, its memories and cultural monuments. Thank you.


10.26.99
lorna (lornawhg@ipa.net) from Cabot, AR

poignant and pleasing
I liked the surprise of the idea that Charlie brown was now Charles, and that he was dealing with the adult angst of lust.


10.22.99
Sherry Chandler from Paris, KY

Finally! Solace for Charlie Brown.
Thanks for this nice turn on the most wistful character in cartoondom. It's a poem - my highest praise.


10.21.99
Scott Kraeling from Eugene, OR

FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC
I got nothing but goose flerssh from this poem this man should write for a living


10.20.99
Victoria from Fargo, ND

Wonderful, simply wonderful.
Charming piece. So familiar, and yet taken with a dose of new medicine. A well written poem, with our favorite mysterious redhead gives us a look at old characters made new again.


10.18.99
Pauly Jacoby (obiwanjacoby@integrityonline.com) from Spokane, WA

I saw it in my mind. . .
I was tossed to and fro by warm romance and humorous pathos. The author has a well defined style. I was almost sure that the night's "cold, wet nose" was going to turn out to be his dog in the end.

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