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Erik Leavitt

How to Make an Origami Fox

Sea horse is easy,
his tail daggers out from his hilt,
his head question marks his form.
Frog is easy too,
his legs are folded wallets.
But Fox,
Fox is difficult like Bear,
his ears scissor from his head
and his cheeks must be bent
like they are full of bones.
The folds must be winter
and clear as a child before sight.
When finished,
the face should gouge angles
into the soft lines
of a hand.


Erik Leavitt is a student of English and classics at Macalester College and has worked as a creative writing teacher for SASE: The Write Place's Our Stories Ourselves program. He has won the Wendy Parrish Poetry Award and his work has appeared in Blue Skunk and American Poet, as well as online at www.crania.com.


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9.28.2000
elisheva alexander from New York, New York

All true
I was actually searching for one of the origami foxes, but this is just as sharp as the folds themselves. Wonderful poem.


01.26.2000
Ned from Portland, Oregon

Subtlety
I love this poem. It's like no other here, I think, it does not tell you what it's doing, it claims such simplicity, the angles of paper, the folds of animals, but runs deeper in places it's difficult to decipher. Perhaps even the author is unsure of what it touches. But the last line speaks to a memory, a feeling, a something, that did not make it into the poem, something that is wholly more powerful than origami alone. Nice work.


01.20.2000
Lea from Miami, Florida

Nifty poem!
Thanx for this little gem, Erik. This is my first visit to Gumball, and it was quite a treat to read your contribution. Very inventive!

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