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David E. Thomas


Saturday Storm Early March

Bare branches
dark
in the swirling
white
snowflakes
crunch
into bootprints
I walk
with the wind
last night's
ache
scrubbed
as I move
along this path
I know
like my own breath
a taste
of solitude
in the whisper
of the creek
an hour
later
reading the paper
the wind
fades
the sun shines
snow
melts.


David E. Thomas lives in Missoula, Montana.


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03.06.00
Jennifer from Sugar Creek, MO

It snowed here, too.
"Last night's ache scrubbed..." that is a wonderful line. This is my favorite poem of all three issues. I'm no academic as some of the reviewers appear to be, giving their constructive criticism,,,but I love words words. These words are put together in such a way that I am walking in that clean cold wind and I feel the fresh start after that long lonely night. I loved these words. Thank you.

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